Nishi
Sylvana
Lolly
Kazzi
Bungie
Comments & Critique
Written by Nishi on Nov 7, 2004
Holy cow, I really love how the mouse is drawn out, very very cute, wonderful detail in her fur and for her tail, and the skirt looks great on her. ^^ The cat character also looks very cute, and you got so many specific designs down too... they looks absolutely wonderful. With such a bend in her back and with her hair bundle on her chest, it makes the top look too wide compared to the legs... though I'm sure you got it all correct, it just looks like that because of the fluff on her front. And the other thing is that her skirt doesn't really seem too attached to her either... maybe it's that whiteness behind the top left-hand part of the skirt that's throwing me off... or maybe the parted leaves... I don't know. But it really does looks splendid aside from that, even those things aren't that big of a deal. :3

The little designs and everything were a great touch to the picture too, brings a lot more festivity and spirit into their dancing, gives it more feeling and such. :3 And even with the star fish close by, it's totally easy to tell that it's on the ground. Other little things like the bucket and pale, the flag, the crab... all such nice little details you put in theire... Boy howdy did you do a great job on them. :P

The ocean's looking wavey indeed, with the white bubbleness of real wavs and the unperfectness of it.... it looks so grand. Ooh, yopu did wonderful with the grass... the two both have their own great qualities. The one on the right is a lot more bright and colorful, but the edge of the grass seems to have a few different colors that still stand out... but that's alright, sometimes when you cut grass it'll turn out that way. I liked the one on the left mucher so everly too because it's short, smooth, and well balanced in color... the shading on it's beautiful too, just strong enough. X3 Very well done Tobers, brilliant work.
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Tobias
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Nov 12, 2004 
Hiya Nishi ^-^

Thanks for your detailed critique, this sure does help a lot .. well, and what should I say? You're, of course, right with what you are saying, her top part I noticed looking too wide, pretty much when still doing the outlining .. I did remove a bit to make her appear a tad thinner, but still, I'd have to remove a whole lot more which would make the picture look odd ^^; And I see what you mean about the skirt, I'd do good reworking that part of the picture when I get back to it.
Oh, and thank you for your nice words as well, they're much appreciated .. and glad you liked the drawing ^-^
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