Nishi
Sylvana
Lolly
Kazzi
Bungie
Comments & Critique
Written by Lolly on Aug 22, 2005
O__O Wow! This picture has gone a LONg way the last time I've seen it! OH my! I lovethe way you have the mouse shadow in the foreground, VERY clever! The spider webs do look spiffier than perfect ones..it kind of adds to the imperectness and stitching up in the picture. Oh, and his legs looks waaaay too small (mainly the thighs) The heels should be connected to his leg..but that could be part of his character design. I think him with very small ears adds to his characters, and makes him more original. Could just be me though. Nicely done, Toby! I deserve a cookie..er..fish.. FISH COOKIE! X3
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Tobias
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Aug 23, 2005 
Aww, thanks ^-^ Hmm, the heels not quite connected to his leg? Wouuuld you mind if you sent me a redline or such where it looks odd, since I definitely would like to change it? ;3

Hehe, you deserve plenty of cookies ^-^ Right now I only have cupcakes, frappuccinos and m&ms around though, soooo that's all I can offer for now? ;3 (even though I plan to go to the mall the next days again, sooo yup, cookies for you ;P )
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Lolly
Aug 23, 2005 
Oh sure! Here's what I mean: [Link]

Sorry that I chopped up the quality by making it JPG. ^^; I hope you can see the red lines.

YAY! Mall bought cookies! <3
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Tobias
Aug 23, 2005 
Hehe, yup, I can see the red lines for sure, none of them are exactly easy to miss *giggles*

I changed it a little to what you showed me, do you think it's better now, or would you prefer the old one?

Oh, and your two characters there look crazy (guess it's toby and lolly?) ;P
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Lolly
Aug 24, 2005 
hehe, I guess not, but just in case..they did blur alot when I saved it in JPG. ^^;

Oh! when I came back to the picture, I instantly noticed that it looked different, didn't know what it way though, until you pointed it out. The legs look alot better (in my opinion)

Yeah..I was just messing around, and decided to add in a few giggles and what not to the picture. X3 tee hee! And those are Toby and Lolly, you genious ;P
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Tobias
Aug 24, 2005 
Yup, I know what you mean .. that's quite a disadvantage of JPEG. Usually though, if you choose a high enough quality and tweak a bit with the settings, you get pretty decent looking pictures .. aaand you could always choose PNG for the best effect ^-^ But anyhow, it worked very well for the purpose, and since you said you like the legs better the way they're now, I think I'll juuust leave them this way ;)

Hehe, I figured .. thouuuugh they look a biiit odd with them both giggling and Jackie being sad, but you're right, I couldn't help but chuckle when I saw it ;3
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Lolly
Aug 29, 2005 
Oh yeah! I remembered that OC has this JPG quality ticker where you can tell it how much quality you want still in the picture. X3 heh, I just did JPG becasue I was kindain a rush, but hoped it would work..which it did. ;3

Oh, and toby? I think it would be great as a print. One of these days, I'll buy something from you and savor it on my bedroom wall. :D

Oh..and I just noticed.. O_O; In my first comment, I meant to say "Nicely done Toby! you deserve a cookie!", not meeeeee..why would I deserve a cookie? XD
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Tobias
Aug 29, 2005 
Hehe, yup, that's what I meant ^-^ And don't worry, it did its job very well, so it's all good ;3

Aww, thanks ^^ Usually I get the prints for my friends through (if you look at the prices on devArt, you'll probably notice they're not exactly affordable - except for the "Prodigious" one ;P .., that's because I just have them there so my friends can add them to their wishlist ;3 ), not sure how I'll do it with this one, but probably more or less the same ^-^ (I'd send you the original pencil drawing though, if I could ^^)

Oh, I noticed that one as well - I thought you wanted a cookie because .. just like that, ooor because you were the first commenting? ;P I still have a couple of cupcakes to spare (they're too sweet for me ^^; ), soooo you can have them, if you like X3

Tobias
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